Comments on: Vignette #9: Super Glue on a Ball Bearing http://warach.com/wordpress/2009/08/vignette-9-super-glue-on-a-ball-bearing/ Brief Fiction and Random Jottings Thu, 12 Jan 2012 18:13:33 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1 By: Cristina Deptula http://warach.com/wordpress/2009/08/vignette-9-super-glue-on-a-ball-bearing/comment-page-1/#comment-2 Cristina Deptula Fri, 28 Aug 2009 22:54:03 +0000 http://warach.com/wordpress/?p=263#comment-2 Interesting - came across your writing on Craigslist and intrigued by your style and choice of the vignette form. You have the germs of several novels here...and generally have a great balance among action, description, and dialogue, although this particular piece could use shorter sentences and more clarity at the beginning, at least in my opinion ;) Interesting setting though. We at Synchronized Chaos international variety magazine would love to publish and feature your writing...please email cedeptula@sbcglobal.net if you would be interested. We're a networking site for writers and artists and musicians and periodically post calls for submissions from magazines and galleries and try to drop names whenever possible and have people read each other's work and drop each other's names. So if you'd like feel free to send some written pieces and a bio/artist's statement our way and we'll get you published by the end of September! Thanks, Cristina Deptula Creative Facilitator Interesting – came across your writing on Craigslist and intrigued by your style and choice of the vignette form. You have the germs of several novels here…and generally have a great balance among action, description, and dialogue, although this particular piece could use shorter sentences and more clarity at the beginning, at least in my opinion ;) Interesting setting though.

We at Synchronized Chaos international variety magazine would love to publish and feature your writing…please email cedeptula@sbcglobal.net if you would be interested. We’re a networking site for writers and artists and musicians and periodically post calls for submissions from magazines and galleries and try to drop names whenever possible and have people read each other’s work and drop each other’s names.

So if you’d like feel free to send some written pieces and a bio/artist’s statement our way and we’ll get you published by the end of September!

Thanks,

Cristina Deptula
Creative Facilitator

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