http://warach.com/wordpress/2010/01/vignette-13-tight-grip/ Brief Fiction and Random Jottings Thu, 12 Jan 2012 18:13:33 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1 http://warach.com/wordpress/2010/01/vignette-13-tight-grip/comment-page-1/#comment-128 Dana Tue, 09 Feb 2010 16:12:01 +0000 http://warach.com/wordpress/?p=384#comment-128 Very descriptive. You set the scene well. Very descriptive. You set the scene well.

]]> http://warach.com/wordpress/2010/01/vignette-13-tight-grip/comment-page-1/#comment-121 CJ Sat, 06 Feb 2010 03:25:13 +0000 http://warach.com/wordpress/?p=384#comment-121 Argh.. leaving comments here is tricky.. If I've left 3, please feel free to delete. Anyhow, excellent description - been on that road, been through that stoplight - you bring it to mind very vividly. Argh.. leaving comments here is tricky.. If I've left 3, please feel free to delete.
Anyhow, excellent description – been on that road, been through that stoplight – you bring it to mind very vividly.

]]> http://warach.com/wordpress/2010/01/vignette-13-tight-grip/comment-page-1/#comment-75 me. Sun, 24 Jan 2010 21:23:38 +0000 http://warach.com/wordpress/?p=384#comment-75 Very descriptive. You definitely get a clear sense of the environment and the character's actions -- and you want to know what happens next. :D nice job. Very descriptive. You definitely get a clear sense of the environment and the character’s actions — and you want to know what happens next. nice job.

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