Comments on: Paradise Air Tours

By: Susan Cross

Susan Cross — Mon, 01 Mar 2010 23:08:40 +0000

Good, descriptive piece. The one line ending was perfect. Maybe the cat will find something else to eat before getting to him. Well, one can hope.

By: mazzz_in_Leeds

mazzz_in_Leeds — Sat, 20 Feb 2010 19:28:49 +0000

Uh-oh. This will not end well….

The fourth paragraph was particularly good – very primal.

By: ganymeder

ganymeder — Sat, 20 Feb 2010 17:54:13 +0000

I think I would have preferred instant death by explosion. Cats tend to play with their food. *shudder*

By: Laura Eno

Laura Eno — Sat, 20 Feb 2010 17:16:43 +0000

Oh, man…risk death by explosion or death by large cat? Enjoyable story. Welcome to #fridayflash!

By: Marisa Birns

Marisa Birns — Sat, 20 Feb 2010 14:52:44 +0000

This is why I never really say, “It can’t get any worse,” about situations.

It is a good scary/sad story.

And it’s #fridayflash…welcome!

By: Cathy Olliffe

Cathy Olliffe — Sat, 20 Feb 2010 04:11:58 +0000

Some guys get all the breaks, some don’t get squat.
I’m thinking this fellah got squat.
On the bright side, he won’t be worried about his ankle anymore.
Ya see? This is why I don’t fly anywhere….
Liked your story, by the by. Thanks!