Comments on: Vignette #16: Lawn Furniture

By: France Picolet

France Picolet — Mon, 26 Apr 2010 14:17:39 +0000

Hey very nice blog!!….I’m an instant fan, I have bookmarked you and I’ll be checking back on a regular….See ya

By: Amanda Scotney

Amanda Scotney — Thu, 01 Apr 2010 23:25:17 +0000

I could imagine being there. A private moment, with another possible story unfolding.

By: Laurita

Laurita — Tue, 23 Mar 2010 10:56:23 +0000

It could be the blob.
Great descriptions in this, and I like how you pulled it to a completely different mood at the end.

By: ganymeder

ganymeder — Mon, 22 Mar 2010 17:45:59 +0000

Hmmmm. I wonder if it was missiles? Maybe the one in his yard was a dud or something. Well done!

By: John Wiswell

John Wiswell — Sun, 21 Mar 2010 01:00:57 +0000

It could be Superman! Those are the pod doors opening, it could totally be Superman! It doesn’t have to be some horrible gear monster from Neptune! You go down first and check, I’ll stay here and hold the rope.

…That was my first reaction.

The second one was, nice work. Cold and smooth.

By: Jim Dempsey

Jim Dempsey — Sat, 20 Mar 2010 15:45:48 +0000

I really liked this, good writing. Charlie Parker, a glass of whiskey and that comfortable chair, a recipe for some not-so-sweet dreams, i reckon.

By: Marisa Birns

Marisa Birns — Fri, 19 Mar 2010 11:48:05 +0000

I never get to see the Perseid shower because of falling asleep.

Very clever. A possible alien visitor riding on the coattails of shooting stars.

Nicely done.

By: uberVU - social comments

uberVU - social comments — Fri, 19 Mar 2010 02:08:32 +0000

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By: Carrie Clevenger

Carrie Clevenger — Fri, 19 Mar 2010 01:06:35 +0000

This was very pretty. A close encounter? He better check the radiation there.